You had me from the start with your characters
You were breaking through all kinds of literary barriers
Chapter one was a sprint through a captivating plot
What would happen next was my every thought
An unsolved crime mixed with a missing child
Family and professional tensions
All a little wild
Enter one who raises the stakes
Blue eyes, dark hair and of course a doctor – to make every female reader faint
Hypothetically, that is
Because remember it’s fiction
Until she reads about the kiss
And anyone can fill the picture in
Can we go back to the plot
To the mystery and the day-to-day
Because, what was I reading? For a minute I forgot
Can I go back a few pages or rewrite what I think’s best
Those two sisters in the house are a mess
I’m not sure I can finish the story
I want to undo those two girls’ mistakes
Because the sheep is not what you think
He’s disguised
How does fiction make me look at my own life
I don’t like the smut
It’s like walking around in a field explosives
The wounds of friends hit closest
I put it down and step out
Look at my life
Who holds the clout
Is there poison in the gateau
Are kind actions just a show
It’s hard to tell but the fiction reminds me
To tread lightly and look around
To stick to the plot and to enjoy the mystery

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